FabGuys.com forum: The life and times of a secret nudist (Chapter 28)

By *agan OP Man
3 weeks ago

basildon

The hairs on my forearms stood up in the fresh morning air.”Jesus Dan, calm your silly arse down” I mumbled smiling to myself.

Brushing the excited goosebumps on my left forearm with my right hand I looked up from the bench that I was sitting on.”Cmon where are you guys?” I muttered looking over the road at the cafe.

A lone woodpigeon began to coo its morning greeting to the new day in the sycamore tree above me as I checked my watch.

‘8:25 ,five minutes Dannyboy’ I thought to myself taking a deep calming breath.Folding my arms I stretched out my legs infront of me crossing both ankles.”This plan better work” I muttered to myself scanning the shop fronts and the bustling early bird shoppers.

Suddenly from the corner of my eye I spotted Linda and Anne as they walked into view

Walking side by side they chatted to each other merrily stopping now again to look into different shop windows.

“Cmon don’t over play it” I mumbled to myself impatiently watching the distant figures lingering outside a clothes shop.

Slowly as they made their way closer to the cafe I got a good look at what they was wearing.”Blimey Linda”I said to myself looking at the tight white leggings that showed of her round shapely bottom nicely.wearing a low cut black t shirt she smiled at a short short wearing Anne.Even from over the round I could see the bottom of Anne’s buttocks as they jiggled nicely below her cut up denim shorts.A small loose white vest just covered her small shapely breasts.

‘If that doesn’t get carrier bag mans attention, than nothing will’I thought to myself smiling watching them disappear into the Cafe.

“Finally the trap is set”I mumbled to myself scanning the early shoppers over the road for any sign of him.

A red Peugeot car slowly drove up the road revving noisily in first gear making me glance up at it.

“Shit” I muttered loudly putting my head down as i realised who the driver was.Craning his stubbled face round to look out the back window Graham reversed the car quickly into a parking space outside the cafe.

“Shit, shit shit!” I said in a panic getting up from the bench and quickly moving behind the large trunk of the sycamore tree.

“What the fuck are you doing here?” I muttered peering round the tree as I watched the carrier bag man step out from the passenger side door.

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By *oventry4biMan
3 weeks ago

coventry

Such great suspense

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By *atchmo_Jizz!Man
3 weeks ago

Wolverhampton

Love it!

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By *unwithuMan
3 weeks ago

manchester

Good start to this chapter

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By *asher72Man
3 weeks ago

Newton Abbot

You’ve really got my interest, great writing as usual Pagan xx

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3 weeks ago

dungannon

Fantastic

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3 weeks ago

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3 weeks ago

Middlewich

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3 weeks ago

Stockport

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3 weeks ago

DeVizes

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3 weeks ago

dudley

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3 weeks ago

Scunthorpe

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By *entleoneMan
3 weeks ago

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Another great chapter

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3 weeks ago

notts

Great start! Looking forward to another amazing chapter

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3 weeks ago

Wakefield

Oh yes!

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3 weeks ago

dundee

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3 weeks ago

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3 weeks ago

dungannon

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3 weeks ago

Hailsham

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By *agan OP Man
3 weeks ago

basildon

“Fuck! Your working together“ I muttered to my self peeking round the tree watching the carrier bag man disappear into the cafe.

From where I hid I could see Graham sitting in the car reaching up messing around with the rear view mirror before slouching down in his seat.

“I should of guessed you’d have something to do with the photos you fucker” I mumbled to myself as Linda and Anne stepped out of the cafe carrying their wrapped up breakfast sandwiches.Unaware that Graham was now learing at them smiling to himself they walked past his car cheerfully chatting.

‘Cmon girls keep moving, stick to the plan’ I thought to myself peering round the tree trying to ignore the growing bad feeling inside of me.

Suddenly I saw the carrier bag man step out of the cafe and walk quickly to the car.

Leaning on the car door he said something to Graham through the open car window before reaching in with his chubby right hand.

“That’s it get your camera” I whispered to myself as he pulled out a large carrier bag containing something.Smiling and nodding to Graham he stood up straight.”See you soon” he said loudly before tapping the roof of the car and turning to follow Anne and Linda.

A pang of panic shot up my spine as Graham sat watching the girls walk away.

‘If he sits waiting for him to come back I won’t be able to follow, he’ll see me’I thought watching the girls getting further away.

“Cmon drive away!” I mumbled glaring at him hiding behind the tree trying to some how telepathically control him.”Cmon, cmon,cmon” I whispered desperately as the distant figures turned down a side path into some trees and out of my veiw.

The car engine revved noisily into life before slowly pulling out into the road.

“Thank fuck for that” I said to myself stepping out from behind the tree watching the car drive away still in first gear.

My heart was thumping in my chest as I crossed the road and walked quickly past the shops.”Hurry up Dan, catch up ,don’t fuck this up!”I mumbled taking the same tree canopied path the girls took.

Five minutes later looking ahead of me I could see the red of the carrier bag man’s tshirt in the distance standing out nicely against the yellow iris and bulrushes that now grew thick on my left

Slowing my pace I looked up at a weather worn sign that read:RIVER 1 MILE.

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By *asher72Man
3 weeks ago

Newton Abbot

Great bit of writing, the suspense is building xx

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By *unwithuMan
3 weeks ago

manchester

Thank you Pagan.

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3 weeks ago

DeVizes

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3 weeks ago

Scunthorpe

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3 weeks ago

Swanwick area

Drown him, no

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3 weeks ago

dungannon

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3 weeks ago

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3 weeks ago

belfast

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3 weeks ago

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3 weeks ago

kings norton/kings heath

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3 weeks ago

Harlow

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3 weeks ago

Middlewich

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By *rdiscreet327Man
3 weeks ago

notts

Things are hotting up again!

Love your writing as always Pagan.

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2 weeks ago

RM16

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By *agan OP Man
2 weeks ago

basildon

For a while I followed the carrier bag man until the now stoney sandy path curved and then straightened.

“Your to exposed Dannyboy.If he looks round he,ll see you” I muttered to myself looking to my right at the tree line.

Stepping off the path I quickly climbed a grassy bank.”Much better,use the trees to hide” I said to myself looking down catching a glimpse of Anne and Linda ahead on the path.

For twenty minutes I dodged round the trunks of the trees keeping my eyes on the girls until I was level with their stalker.

The hot morning sun glinted off its cool inviting water making me squint as I stopped and crouched behind a large oak tree watching him.

Suddenly Linda stopped and grabbed Annes right hand.Smiling she lent into Anne and whispered something.

Laughing loudly Anne looked at her.”Well I will if you will” she giggled.

Moving quickly off the path the carrier bag man ducked behind an elder bush to his left hiding himself from Anne who now was turning to check if the coast was clear.

“Come on then Anne let’s cool off” I heard Linda’s voice call faintly on the breeze before I saw her quickly reach down and pull her black tshirt over her head exposing her naked breasts.

Turning watching Linda wiggling her hips pulling down her white leggings Anne gave out an excited squeal.

“Hey wait for me” she shouted undoing her shorts as she walked towards river.

“Last one in is a loser”I heard Linda say chuckling before dropping her leggings to the grassy bank and stepping naked into the shallow clear river.

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By *unwithuMan
2 weeks ago

manchester

Thank you Pagan, set the scene again so well

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By *asher72Man
2 weeks ago

Newton Abbot

You definitely know how to keep the tension going Pagan xx

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By *agan OP Man
2 weeks ago

basildon

“Hey not fair” Anne shouted letting her shorts drop to the bank.

A horny wave shot up my spine as my hard penis pushed at my jeans.”Fuck!” I whispered to myself looking at Linda standing naked looking back at Anne laughing.

Her nipples stood erect from her well rounded breasts.”It’s a tad cold but invigorating “she said dipping her hands into the clear water before splashing it up onto her belly and exposed well groomed vagina.

“Fuck it’s freezing” Anne squealed loudly pulling off her vest and stepping naked into the river.

My head spun with lust.”Get a grip Dannyboy” I grumbled to myself wishing I was joining them.

“Come on Anne darling, let me help you” Linda said raising her right hand up for Anne’s hand.

Wading up to her knees Anne took Lindas hand giggling loudly.”We must be mad” she said excitedly stepping closer to Lindas shapely naked body.

“Mmmmm doesn’t it just make you feel all tingling inside?”Anne said looking up at Linda.

Pulling Anne to her Linda put her arms round Anne’s naked back hugging her as their breasts squashed together.”You’ve made me feel like that all morning” Linda said moving her hands slowly down Anne’s back cupping her shapely buttocks in her hands before kissing her.

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By *atchmo_Jizz!Man
2 weeks ago

Wolverhampton

Thank you Pagan!

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By *ashtoolMan
2 weeks ago

belfast

More great reading cock got so hard another wank as I read

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2 weeks ago

dudley

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By *agan OP Man
2 weeks ago

basildon

Feeling shocked I watched Annes body quiver with excitement.”Bloody hell girls, it was just suppose to be a skinny dip” I whispered to myself moving my right hand over my jeans and groping my hard penis.

Taking her lips away from Annes Linda smiled before slowly stepping backwards deeper into the water.

“Come Anne,let’s swim to the other side” she said still holding Anne’s hand.

Quickly looking at the carrier bag man behind the bush I could see him kneeling down pulling out a black Polaroid camera from the bag.

“Gotcha!” I muttered smiling to myself before looking back at the girls swimming naked across the river towards a large flat rock that stuck out the water in-front of a thick reed bed.

Their excited laughter seemed to echo in the breeze around me sending another horny wave down my spine.Groping my erect manhood harder through my jeans I watched as Linda helped Anne climb naked onto the rock from the water.

Annes wet naked skin shone in the sunlight.looking down at Linda still in the water she smiled before turning her hips and opening her legs.

“Mmmmm fucking hell girls your killing me” I mumbled to myself as Linda quickly plunged her face onto Annes exposed pussy.

Suddenly from the corner of my eye I saw the carrier bag man stand up from behind the bush. Holding the camera to his chest he quickly walked to where Anne and Linda had entered the water.

Pointing the camera across the water he smiled to himself pressing the button.

“Oh fuck Linda your tongues driving me crazy” Anne moaned loudly as the camera ejected a photo from its plastic body.

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By *asher72Man
2 weeks ago

Newton Abbot

This story is driving me crazy but in a good way. Thanks Pagan xx

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By *endarMan
2 weeks ago

Morton-in-Marsh

Excellent trap, hope the Carrier Man gets duly punished

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By *aster CaneMan
2 weeks ago

bridgemary Gosport

I think a swin is called for push him Dan

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2 weeks ago

dundee

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2 weeks ago

Middlewich

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2 weeks ago

Scunthorpe

Go for it Dan

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2 weeks ago

bitown

Intriguing

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2 weeks ago

kings norton/kings heath

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2 weeks ago

belfast

Mmmmmmm great

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2 weeks ago

mine

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By *rdiscreet327Man
2 weeks ago

notts

I just can’t get enough of this.

You’re writing is incredible op.

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2 weeks ago

DeVizes

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2 weeks ago

dungannon

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By *om5699Man
2 weeks ago

Rayleigh

Another exciting instalment.

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By *agan OP Man
2 weeks ago

basildon

Taking the photo from the front of the camera the carrier bag man quickly put it in his bag before pointing the camera at the girls again.

Anne now lay back naked on the rock.Her body quivering to the pleasure it felt from Lindas lapping tongue.

“Ooh yes lick it like that Linda, make me cum!” She moaned loudly pressing her right hand down on the back of Lindas head lightly.

Suddenly over the other side of the bank my eyes spotted movement.Looking up over the reed bed I was amazed to see a small herd of wild ponies.Led by a almost black one they slowly trotted down to the waters edge to drink.

“Nice” I muttered smiling to myself before something else caught my eye.Movement in the reeds.”What is that?”I said under my breath as I noticed the tops of the reeds moving and parting slowly as whatever it was made its way slowly towards the two naked girls.

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By *asher72Man
2 weeks ago

Newton Abbot

That’s it, I’m totally hooked 😈

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2 weeks ago

Middlewich

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2 weeks ago

manchester

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2 weeks ago

coventry

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By *agan OP Man
2 weeks ago

basildon

“Ffffuck I’m cumming” I heard Anne moan as I squinted at the tops of the reeds moving.

Suddenly the carrier bag man moved forward.

After taking one more photo he bent down examining Lindas clothing.

Smiling to himself he tucked the camera under his left arm and reached down with his right.

“You dirty fucker” I whispered through gritted teeth as he picked up Lindas gstring and quickly placed it to his nose sniffing deeply.

“OI WHAT YOU UP TO”shouted Anne as she looked up from the rock at the carrier bag man.

Startled that he had been spotted the carrier bag man dropped the g string.Hugging the camera in his chubby arms he turned and began to walk quickly back to the bush and his bag.

“Fuck!” I said loudly standing up and quickly stepping out from behind the tree I was hiding behind.

“GET HIM DAN,DONT LET HIM GET AWAY” I heard Anne shout as I ran down the bank towards the fleeing figure.

My heart raced in my chest.Seeing that I was running towards him the carrier bag man run and picked up his bag.Dropping the camera into it he looked at me scowling.

“FUCK OFF DAN!” He shouted before beginning to run again.

“Cmere you fuck”I growled reaching out trying to grab at his red tshirt.

Red faced and panting heavily he swang his right arm out at me.

“FUCK OFF” he shouted as the hard camera casing smashed into my temple. Dazed but still running with him my fingers made contact with his t shirt.”STOP” I shouted curling my hand into a fist I tugging at the material.

Turning to try and hit me again the carrier bag mans front leg buckled underneath him.”AAARGH MY LEG” he screamed out in pain as we both fell forward onto the grassy bank.

Still holding onto his tshirt for dear life I quickly nelt on top of him holding him down.

“Gotcha you psycho “ I hissed out of breath as I looked up to see Jean walking quickly towards us down the sandy path.

Wearing a long black summer dress and black tight silk blouse she stood over us. “Well done Danny dear” she said giving me a half smile before glaring down at the carrier bag man.

“GET OFF ME!”he shouted curling his chunky body into a feral position hugging the bag tightly to himself.

“Who are you?And why are you hell bent in making our lives a misery?” Jean asked flashing her greeny blue eyes at him like a cat does to its prey.

The sound of someone quickly wading from the river behind me filled my ears as the carrier bag answered with a “fuck you witch”.

“Well done Danny you got him” said Linda walking up the bank naked towards us as I got to my feet pulling the carrier bag man up with me.

“If you try to escape, I will put you to the floor again” I said glaring at the carrier bag man as he stared at Lindas nakedness with a sickly grin on his face.

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By *otwillyMan
2 weeks ago

Scunthorpe

Well done Dan

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By *asher72Man
2 weeks ago

Newton Abbot

Now we need to know who was in the reeds x

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2 weeks ago

manchester

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By *agan OP Man
2 weeks ago

basildon

“What shall we do with this worm of a man” Linda asked glaring back at him.

“Well if he won’t to talk me then maybe he will to the police” said Jean still looking at him.

“Did you enjoy licking her sweet pussy?” Asked the carrier bag man grinning at Linda with a strange look on his face.

Tightening my grip on his tshirt I pushed him in the back.”Shut up” I barked at him.

Laughing to himself he cocked his chubby head to one side and looked at Jean.

“You’ve no idea whats coming for you, do you witch?” He said sneering at her.

“Why don’t you enlighten me” said Jean flashing her eyes at him angrily.

“Your past is catching up with you witch!I am but a poor miserly worm sent out to bring you home”.he said widening his eyes with a sickly grin on his face.

Suddenly the sound of splashing came from the other side of the river.

For a second we all looked at each other wondering what the commotion was.

“Where’s Anne?” I asked looking at Linda as she pulled up her white leggings over her hips.

Looking at me with wide worried eyes Linda turned towards the river before gasping loudly.

Pushing the carrier bag man forward I looked at where Linda was staring.

Graham his clothes wet and mucky from his stalking in the reeds had his right hand clamped over Anne’s mouth and his left arm round her waist as he pulled her naked and thrashing from the water.

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By *otwillyMan
2 weeks ago

Scunthorpe

Further intrigue

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By *unwithuMan
2 weeks ago

manchester

This is quite a scene

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By *asher72Man
2 weeks ago

Newton Abbot

Keep it going Pagan, I’m on the edge of my seat xx

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By *vfanMan
2 weeks ago

swansea

Can this story get any better

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By *ust_havin_funMan
2 weeks ago

mine

Wow such amazing writing and so many twists and turns

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2 weeks ago

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By *rdiscreet327Man
2 weeks ago

notts

Oh wow! I didn’t see this coming.

So gripped Pagan.

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2 weeks ago

DeVizes

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2 weeks ago

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2 weeks ago

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2 weeks ago

dungannon

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2 weeks ago

Rayleigh

More please.

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2 weeks ago

Middlewich

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2 weeks ago

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By *agan OP Man
2 weeks ago

basildon

Anger and panic overloaded my body as I watched Anne kicking out desperately trying to escape Grahams gripping arms.

“OI !LET HER GO!” I shouted across the river.For a second Graham looked over at us all from the reeds with a look of lust on his face.

“FUCKING LEAVE HER ALONE” I screamed at the top of my lungs.

A sickly mad looking grin erupted across Grahams face.With his glaring eyes squinting at me he shook his head slowly before dragging a naked Anne backwards into the reeds.

“NOOOO!” I screamed as he turned his back to carry Anne back the way he had come through the reed bed.

Kneeing the carrier bag man in the back of his knee I pulled his t shirt sending his bulky body falling backwards onto the bank.

“Stay there” I barked at him as he looked up at me shocked and winded.Quickly looking back at Linda I told her to watch him.

“What are you going to do?” I heard her ask as I quickly waded into the river.

The cold water quickly filled my boots making them feel like bricks strapped to my feet.With tears of frustration and anger in my eyes I waded deeper up to my knees trying desperately to keep my eyes on Grahams fleeing body.

“NO DAN! ITS TO DEEP FOR YOU.YOU CANT SWIM!” I heard Linda shout behind me as the river mud sucked down my heavy wet boots.

“JEAN DO SOMETHING”.

Stopping feeling the river water whirling round me trying to topple my body into its depths I looked round at the bank.

Linda was now ankle deep beckoning me to come back in panic whilst Jean stood stock still behind her staring across the river.

“GRAHAM RELEASE HER AND I PROMISE I WONT HURT YOU” said jeans voice calmly as it amplified across the water.

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2 weeks ago

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By *agan OP Man
2 weeks ago

basildon

Looking back over the river I could just see through the reeds Grahams body stop.

Turning his shoulders with Anne still struggling in his arms he glared over the river at Jean.

“HURT ME YOU STUPID BITCH?,YOUVE ALREADY HURT ME” he screamed over the water.”THE DAY YOU DESTROYED MY SISTERS LIFE AND TOOK HER FAMILY”.

Turning my head I looked back at Jean. Unwavered by Grahams shouting she stood staring at him whispering unknown words into the breeze.

“DO YOU KNOW WHERE SHE IS NOW YOU BITCH?” Shouted Graham angrily.”SHE,S IN A NUT HOUSE.DRIVEN MAD BECAUSE OF YOU, YOU FUCKING WHORE!”

Jeans mouth stopped muttering.”I REPEAT LEAVE ANNE ALONE AND I WONT HURT YOU” she said lowering her head slightly glaring her green Bluey eyes at Graham.

Laughing loudly Graham moved his manly hand up to Anne’s left wet breast groping it roughly.

“FUCK OFF WITCH! IM LOOKING FORWARD TO TEARING THIS SLUT A NEW ASSHOLE! IM NOT SCARED OF YOUR STUPID MADE UP HIPPY DIPPY VOODOO SHIT” he shouted backing up into the reeds.

Closing her eyes Jean raised her face up to the sky and began muttering again to herself.

Feeling my foot sink further into the river bed I lent back hard onto my left leg pulling back from the sucking mud.

Suddenly the reeds erupted as Graham began to thrash wildly in reeds.”FUCK OFF, GET AWAY! he shouted sounding panicked.

Looking up quickly I saw for a split second the figure of Graham coming back through the reeds towards the river still with Anne naked in his gripping arms surrounded by glowing darting small insect sized lights.

Unbalanced by the quick release of my boot from the sucking mud I fell back hard into the river.Engulfed by the sudden shock of cold water I thrashed my arms wildly about gulping in a mouthful of water. Even under water my ears heard the desperate screams of pain coming from across the water.

End of chapter x

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By *otwillyMan
2 weeks ago

Scunthorpe

Great writing

Yet more twists and turns in this story

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2 weeks ago

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2 weeks ago

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2 weeks ago

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By *pidercrabMan
2 weeks ago

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Wow this keeps getting g better .thanks .

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By *rdiscreet327Man
2 weeks ago

notts

Unreal!

So good

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2 weeks ago

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By *atchmo_Jizz!Man
2 weeks ago

Wolverhampton

I’m on tenterhooks!

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By *asher72Man
2 weeks ago

Newton Abbot

Great writing as usual Pagan, can’t wait for the next chapter xxx

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2 weeks ago

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2 weeks ago

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2 weeks ago

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By *om5699Man
2 weeks ago

Rayleigh

Fantastic story. I live the various twists. More please when you can.

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6 days ago

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